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The result was: promoted by, Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:50, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

To the Fourth of July※

• ... that To the Fourth of July was written by Swami Vivekananda (pictured) on 4 July 1898, on the anniversary of America's Independence (4 July 1776), incidentally died on the same date (4 July 1902)?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Air Mata Iboe
• Comment: a) DATE PREFERENCE: 4 July (preferably first American slot)

Created/expanded by Titodutta (talk), Bgwhite (talk). Nominated by Titodutta (talk) at 23:51, 31 May 2013 (UTC).

• Comment: That hook is a hodge-podge of words. Try something like ALT1... that Swami Vivekananda (pictured) wrote To the Fourth of July on the anniversary of United States' Independence and incidentally died on the same date four years later? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:27, 1 June 2013 (UTC)

• ALT1 okay! --Tito Dutta  (talk • contributions • email) 14:31, 1 June 2013 (UTC)

• Alright (since I suggested the hook, "the current consensus is that I can't review it."..). I'd strike the original — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:34, 1 June 2013 (UTC)

• Long enough, "well-cited," hook's good, article's new and "the picture is PD." Good to go. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 18:49, 1 June 2013 (UTC)

Keep the wording to the title of the page. IE- "United States' Independence" not America's...Lihaas (talk) 19:55, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Made changes above. --Tito☸Dutta 01:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)

As a military historian, I have to note that the United States declaration of Independence was on 2 July, not 4 July. Tweaked hook slightly. Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:49, 3 July 2013 (UTC)