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A fact from Tove Jansson appeared on XIV's Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 February 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination※
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or XIV talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:55, 3 February 2024 (UTC)※
- ... that Tove Jansson (pictured) accepted an offer from a British newspaper man? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2014/jan/15/tove-jansson-life-words-westin-review
Improved to Good Article status by Chiswick Chap (talk). Self-nominated at 21:55, 14 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Tove Jansson; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.※
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
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- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- Other problems: - Something odd happening with Copyvios report but first one I've dismissed as a copy of the Wiki article and second (Tovepedia page) I've read through and checked and it's book titles and awards that seem to be causing the matching.
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article. And clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Perhaps hook could be more intriguing with some when and a tiny bit more what (without totally giving the game away), e.g. "In 1952, Tove Jansson accepted a lucrative offer from a British newspaper man?" Zeromonk (talk) 09:44, 15 January 2024 (UTC)※
- ALT1: "In 1952, Tove Jansson accepted a lucrative offer from a British newspaper man?"
- I'm happy with that, and the source is unchanged. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:58, 15 January 2024 (UTC)※
- The hook/alt are misleading and set an absurd precedent: you can remove relevant info from all hooks, make them look more mysterious than they are, and draw clicks with that method, doing absolutely no service to the topic itself. The bland info here is that she accepted an offer to draw the comics in English papers as well (well, it's actually not that bland, it would be somewhat interesting on itself); the pointlessly vague phrasing here makes it seem like the offer was from James Humphreys. Is the subject here really so obscure that there's nothing else to fish from the article, and that we have to resort to this sort of trickery? Dahn (talk) 17:56, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- I'm very sorry you feel that way, and the old-style hook is certainly not a "precedent": it was for many years the XIV DYK tradition to make hooks somewhat entertaining and ambiguous; indeed, short witty hooks were considered the best. If times have changed and we have to be straight-faced and literal now, that's fine (maybe other reviewers will be happy with it, I don't know; the reviewer above was), but there is no reason to become angry about it. Anyway, here's another in case we choose not to go with one of the hooks above. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:38, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- It's not about being straight-faced and literal, it's about not relying on nonsensical deception to make the article seem more interesting (this is especially weird here, where the article seems reasonably interesting). Dahn (talk) 18:59, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- I'm very sorry you feel that way, and the old-style hook is certainly not a "precedent": it was for many years the XIV DYK tradition to make hooks somewhat entertaining and ambiguous; indeed, short witty hooks were considered the best. If times have changed and we have to be straight-faced and literal now, that's fine (maybe other reviewers will be happy with it, I don't know; the reviewer above was), but there is no reason to become angry about it. Anyway, here's another in case we choose not to go with one of the hooks above. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:38, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- ALT2: ... that Tove Jansson (pictured) drew illustrations for the satirical magazine Garm?Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20110807230113/http://www.kansallisbiografia.fi/english/?id=1395
- ALT3: ... that Tove Jansson (pictured) had an "unusually even balance between visual art and writing"?Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20110807230113/http://www.kansallisbiografia.fi/english/?id=1395
- Alt 2 has some modicum of interest only if one already knows who Jansson was, and that she drew mainly for children. ALT 3 is a bland statement that rhymes with just about any author who also drew. How about how she made a political figure that she she dated into Snufkin? how about her Moomintroll was originally used in her political cartoons? how about the psychological clues about her family and how they seeped into her illustrations? Seriously, you're acting like this is an obscure bland figure on whom nothing interesting can be found, and in fact she was a trove of beautiful quirks. Dahn (talk) 18:59, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- I've suggested two witty and two plain hooks. If you want to propose others, please list and cite them as ALT4, etc. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:01, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- Alt 2 has some modicum of interest only if one already knows who Jansson was, and that she drew mainly for children. ALT 3 is a bland statement that rhymes with just about any author who also drew. How about how she made a political figure that she she dated into Snufkin? how about her Moomintroll was originally used in her political cartoons? how about the psychological clues about her family and how they seeped into her illustrations? Seriously, you're acting like this is an obscure bland figure on whom nothing interesting can be found, and in fact she was a trove of beautiful quirks. Dahn (talk) 18:59, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- Fine. Here's my ALT 4: ... that artist Tove Jansson (pictured) based the children's book character Snufkin on a political philosopher whom she had dated? Dahn (talk) 19:54, 16 January 2024 (UTC)※
- @Chiswick Chap: Does ALT4 work for you? Z1720 (talk) 15:39, 24 January 2024 (UTC)※
- Yes, whatever, I'm a bit bemused by the heat in this process. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:40, 24 January 2024 (UTC)※
- @Zeromonk: Is the above hook approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 15:52, 24 January 2024 (UTC)※
- Alt 4 is fine, happy to approve. Please everyone try to AGF in discussions of hooks. Everyone here wants to try and help people discover new and interesting things, so thank you for doing that and being part of this process. Zeromonk (talk) 10:32, 25 January 2024 (UTC)※
Copyvio issue※
@Chiswick Chap, @Zeromonk - see this Earwig link. Appears to be a pretty straightforward copyvio issue to me. Please promptly fix it and I will revdel the versions with the copyrighted text. If this isn't fixed, the hook will have to be pulled from DYK, unfortunately. —Ganesha811 (talk) 23:54, 6 February 2024 (UTC)※
- @Ganesha811, @Zeromonk - fixed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:15, 7 February 2024 (UTC)※
- @Ganesha811: it appears this has been done as per this Earwig link.Zeromonk (talk) 10:35, 7 February 2024 (UTC)※
- Great, thanks for your quick fix. Should be all set for DYK now. —Ganesha811 (talk) 13:30, 7 February 2024 (UTC)※
- @Ganesha811: it appears this has been done as per this Earwig link.Zeromonk (talk) 10:35, 7 February 2024 (UTC)※
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